my finished letter

hi mum,
ok, so one morning I was looking for nuts but out of no where a man came in. (he said his name was ron) He started showing off a plane that looked great,but the only thing is when he put it down to get something and something in my body asked me to jump in the plane and fly off.
The plane took off with me in it.

 It was so scary and I had to close my eyes but when i did close my eyes I couldn't see where I was going so I nearly crashed into a tree. Ron came running after me and i was screaming for help and even the flying squirrel patrol didn’t come after me!! I finally got control of flying the plane but I nearly crashed onto the ground but the only thing that kept me up right was a cat with the force and a lightsaber.

 when I was in control again I did a loopty loop and then crashed on the ground. I think the cat just thought I deserved that because he didn’t help me again. Then Ron came and picked up the aircraft and i scurried off. I had just enough time to laugh at him because of all he has been through!!

 from your daughter

 this is my work that we did we had to be in the mind of the squirrel in the video. if you have any questions please put them in the comments box bellow :)